Verbs, metaphors, our love became a synergy
ur voice is my drugs, my yearnings get the best of me
I nurse the thoughts of us makin love between the sheets
our lips, our bodies, no place too unclean

But we cant, cuz ur torn between excitement and loyalty
He's the king? Your the queen, Im a joker? f**** me? royally!
Wat does that mean, Lets just be friends?
This aint child play, this is the end!

Im torn on this planet, on tectonic cuz we platonics
higher on ur scent than a korean on manolo blahniks
bad thoughts, nervous sweats, sweaty palms, panic!
but ur heart is like an ice box, and ur soul is arctic

Im here to free ur mind, heat ur soul,
from below 2 above
no stress, more love
safe sex, 1 glove
but u cant and u wont and we are torn.

Readers have left 5 comments.

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deevine, Unregistered

Good write. Emotions nicely penned.

 Posted 2008-07-08 19:59:05

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Juliet Christie murray, Unregistered

this is an interesting piece Seem like young love.

 Posted 2008-05-29 21:03:17

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Sandylove, Author

This one is deep. Love it!!

 Posted 2008-05-08 18:22:09

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Impressed, Unregistered

Masterful!!
A very interesting array of emotions ranging from helplessness and despondence, panic , to even being ecstatic and I like the one last simple offer put on the table.

 Posted 2008-05-07 15:34:26

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